Hiddenpaw groomed herself happily, the snow was falling lightly, covering the dead brown grass and the icy spots that had already almost made her slip and break her neck. Worry flickered in her belly, where was Risepaw? She had been gone since yesterday when Wonderstar announced that she was expecting. It was so unlike Risepaw, to just disappear like that. Suddenly a shriek filled the air, followed by the over-whelming rusty scent of blood that soon filled the clearing. Hiddenpaw's feet felt heavy as rocks, she turned to the camp entrance with a feeling of over-whelming dread at what she might see. First she saw only Pitchedvoice's unmoving shape on the floor of the camp, being surrounded by a pool of blood, but next she noticed the unmistakable jet black pelt of someone that had been long missing.
"Wonderstar, Cloudspinner. Time to play." The cruel and seductive voice of the stunning black she-cat rang through the clearing. The silvery eyes gazed across Hiddenpaw with fiery intent, murder hidden in their depths. The jet black-she cat had cruel yet stunning features, she was both so beautiful to look away and at the same time so chilling that the frozen air of leaf-bare couldn't compare. The she-cat's looks called out everyone of Hiddenpaw's deepest fears, the instincts that told her to run were screaming in her head, but she couldn't look away. Only a voice snapped her out of it.
"Nightfury." Cloudspinner's furious voice echoed in the clearing that was now dead silent. Hiddenpaw could feel the energy in the air sparking. "You decided to show your face here again. Where's your master Ridgestar these days?" Cloudspinner's voice echoed with confidence, as if she didn't see Pitchedvoice dead at her former clan mates feet.
"It's Nightstar now you mangy idiot." Nightstar's voice cracked the air like a whip, sending shivers through Hiddenpaw. She had heard about the she-cat. Nightstar had once been an apprentice of ForestClan, sweet and beautiful as could be. But jealousy of Cloudspinner drover her mad with rage, and she left. It had been moons since anyone had seen her, and this is what she had become. A monster from the dark forest.
A growled escaped from almost all the warriors of ForestClan. Mousejump, Thundertrace and Deepheart all flung themselves at Nightstar with pure rage at the death of their friend. Nightstar's claws flicked out swiftly, in one swift motion she cut a long gash down Mousejump's belly, a wound that would never heal. Then again she slashed at Deepheart, connecting with her face and dragging her claws over Deepheart's eyes. Thundertrace held back for a moment before running at Nightstar, following her sisters. Deepheart moaned on the ground, Mousejump twitched then fell still, and Thundertrace leaped at Nightstar.
A sudden yowl broke out with no warning. IronClan cats poured out of the camp entrance. Thundertrace was lost in the over-flow. ForestClan cats leaped into battle, cats tangled into battle moves, the sounds of shrieks and claws ripping through skin was too much for Hiddenpaw and she simply turned into her misty shape. She looked desperately for the cats she knew and loved.
She saw Rubysoul slipping into the nursery, alone. Hiddenpaw ran over and stood tall in the entrance of the den, protecting her mother desperately. But she still looked for her littermates, Windspaw and Lionpaw were both fighting a jet black she-cat that wasn't nearly as scary as Nightstar. WHERE WAS RISEPAW?! The sounds of battle consumed her, she looked for Cloudspinner. The white she-cat already had a long red gash along her spine, but she was fighting with Nightstar. Wonderstar poked her head out fo the nursery, only then did Hiddenpaw realize that she wasn't invisible anymore.
"Whats going on...?" Her sleepy voice moaned to Hiddenpaw.
"WERE UNDER ATTACK! YOU LAZY FUR BALL!" Hiddenpaw screamed at Wonderstar. Her voice surprised her, but jolted Wonderstar to reality. Wonderstar ran out of the nursery, to the aid of her mate. The calls of battle were all around her, consuming her into one sound of white-noise that pounded on her ears.
Suddenly she was on her side, a sleek grey tabby tom on top of her, growling with anger. He reminded her of Quickpaw...She snapped out of it and slashed at the toms belly, only to be answered by him making a gash down her shoulder. She growled and bit his ear as hard as she could, making quite a bad gash that made the warrior yowl with pain. Her claws here sore already but she kept battering away at the tom that was on top of her. A she-cat's voice yowled at the tom on top of her.
"Darkshiver! We have to find Quickpad!" She howled at the tom that Hiddenpaw guessed was her brother. The tom shook his head and turned back to Hiddenpaw snapping his jaws in her face, that made her shriek. Suddenly all the weight of the tom was off of her, he was just gone...She blinked, blood was filling her gaze, she must have a gash on her forehead...
"HIDDENPAW!" Risepaw's voice screamed from behind the apprentices den. "Whats happening?!" Her eyes were so wide that she could see their whites all around.
"IronClan is attacking! Where have you been?!" Hiddenpaw growled, her sister looked perfect, not a scratch on her!
"Oh my..OH STARCLAN!" Suddenly Risepaw's voice grew desperate, the looked on her face went from shocked to horrified, she looked like she was gonna faint!
"What? Whats wrong?!" Hiddenpaw looked at her sister with worry, what was happening?!
"Quickpad, he knew. He knew..." Risepaw trailed off, had she been with Quickpad?! Hiddenpaw felt curiosity rise in her, as well as rage. Her sister had left camp to be with another cat, a tom! She had stayed with him all night, so that she wouldn't be involved in the battle...
"YOU KNEW. AND YOU DIDN'T WARN US! WHOSE SIDE ARE YOU ON?!" Hiddenpaw screamed at her sister. This could have been stopped, they could have been ready! But her sister hadn't told them!
"No, no, no, no..." Whimpering sounds escaped from Risepaw, her eyes teared up and Hiddenpaw felt her own burning. Risepaw suddenly screamed, but this time with pure rage that shook Hiddenpaw. Risepaw launched herself onto the nearest IronClan cat and started shredding them mercilessly. What had gotten into her sister?! She had no time to think before a tom had tackled her to the ground and she snapped back into battle mode. Hoping that this would just be over.
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Swiftpaw and flashpaw fought side by side, Ashpaw behind them doing the best she could
Morningpaw looked around with horror. She hadn't had any training, but she leaped into battle. She jumped onto the back of another apprentice and began to claw. She caught sight of Risepaw, then followed her example.
Blizzardsight ran out of the warriors den. He pricked his hears to his amazing hearing, then leaped into battle.
She fought side by side with Eagleheart.
-Leafsun
A strange warrior grabbed her by her scruff and was dragged out of camp, the scent of IronClan came to her and she yowled in protest, but no one heard her being kidnapped from her clan.
-Wonderstar
Ashpaw was knocked down by a Ironclan warrior. Her blind green eyes sparking with fear.
(Can Blizardsight hear since he has incredible hearing?)
Morningpaw kinda liked the feeling of the fur shredding off her enemy's back. She kept going, even though she was trying to be a medicine cat apprentice.
(NO!)
Bumblestep fought boldly against a IronClan tom-cat, and the tom grabbed hold of his neck fur with his claws. Bumblestep quickly flung him off and gave him a rough scratch, sending the tom packing for the forest. He looked around, and blinked. Wonderstar was no where in sight. He ran to the camp entrance and looked into the forest. He scraped the dirt, wanting to look for her, but he turned to go fight.
(Should he try to find her, or no? If not its fine :))
~*Bumblestep*~
Ravenflight fought in front of the nursery, shielding the queens and kits from the IronClan cats. He suffered deep wounds up his legs and flanks but he kept going.
~*Ravenflight*~
Berrysun waited in the nursery, and then she felt a huge pain in her side. She was soon laying on the nursery floor panting, and in great pain. Her kits were coming and no one was their to help.
~*Berrysun*~
Oakpaw, and his siblings fought side-by-side, not letting the three rouges they were fighting get away from them.
~*Oakpaw,Silverpaw,Blazepaw*~
She tackled Cloudspinner, anger glowing in her eyes. "Finally I will get you back for all those horrible days when I was an apprentice!" She slashed at Cloudspinner.
-Nightstar
She struggled to get away, she realized that they had made it to the High Branch somehow and she kept backing away from Nightstar.
-Cloudspinner
She lunged at Cloudspinner, knocking her off the branch.
-Nightstar
She hit the ground with a loud thud and she screamed as loud as a monster from the thunder-path, right after a sicking crack the came from her spine.
-Cloudspinner
"It's okay Berrysun, I'm right here. I will help." She soothed the other queen.
-Rubysoul
Berrysun panted faster, and she looked at Rubysoul and quickly nodded.
~*Berrysun*~
Bumblestep suddenly appeared at Cloudspinner's side, slashing at Nightstar. He growled madly and pinned the she-cat down.
"Leave her alone!"
~*Bumblestep*~
She hissed. "OH so now the great deputy is defending a worthless perfect she-cat!" She growled. She threw Bumblestep off of her and looked at Cloudspinner with pure hatred.
-Nightstar
She purred. "Your doing great." She looked at Berrysun.
-Rubysoul
Bumblestep growled madly, and glared at Nightstar. "She is not worthless, you are!" He leapt at her, landing on her back, and he dug his claws into her back.
~*Bumblestep*~
Berrysun kept panting.
~~~~~~~
A while later
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Berrysun looked beside her to see five small kits meowing. She laid her head beside them and purred softly.
~*Berrysun*~
She smiled lightly. "Oh Bumblestep. Don't you see that she couldn't care less about you? Shes using you." Her eyes were so sincere that it was almost impossible to not believe her. She touched her tail tip lightly to his shoulder.
-Nightstar
"You did wonderfully!" She purred. "They are beautiful!"
-Rubysoul
Bumblestep blinked. For a second, he believed her. Then he shook his head.
"No, she wouldnt..."
~*Bumblestep*~
Berrysun purred. Three toms and two she-cats. (I might change it.. idk haha)
~*Berrysun*~
(Okay haha)
"They are perfect Berrysun." She smiled.
-Rubysoul
She whimpered, her spine was clearly broken and blood pooled around her and trickled from her mouth. Her breathing was irregular. "Bumblestep, don't believe her." She turned her teary gaze to him, her blue eyes filled with pain and love. Her own blood was smeared across her cheek, she looked weaker than ever.
-Cloudspinner
"Poor Bumblestep." She saw Cloudspinner's love for the tom so easily, did he?! This was almost perfect. "Come to IronClan with me, you'll be happy, and you won;t be used." Rage, jealousy and anger flickered in her eyes.
-Nightstar
(hey, should he believe her and go, then come back like, wayyyy later? or not..?)
(Sigh, I never get to do anything. I be active and post a lot AND advertise your clan everywhere I'm allowed, yet I get to do anything.)
Ashpaw fought franticly slashing the cat on top of her. ' I wish I could see!' She tought. The cat on tp of her snickered " A blind apprentice! How cute!" He laughed
(Okay Chile Panda: For one I already had this ENTIRE plot planned out LONG before you joined, so there isn't much you can do.)
(And Thunder, I was gonna leave that part of it up to you, I have thoughts for what could happen either way, so u can chose. But Cloudspinner may not take him back so easily if he left her for Nightstar.)
(Sorry, I just feel neglected sometimes. I tend to misunderstand.)
Blizzrdsight got a tom to start chasing him. He slowly started to speed up, then turned abruptly. The surprised tom attempted to skid to a halt, but instead slammed into a rock.
Bumblestep blinked at Nightstar. A idea formed in his head. He knew that Cloudspinner was going to hate him, but he hoped she would learn to forgive him. He turned to Nightstar.
"I will go with you. If you let me say goodbye to Cloudspinner."
~*Bumblestep*~
Tigerkit and Sleetkit looked around the nursery from wide eyes, as did their siblings. You could easily tell they were anxious and scared about what was happening.
~*Tigerkit, Sleetkit, and others*~
Her eyes burned. She looked at him with pain that he was leaving the clan, leaving her.
-Cloudspinner
She nodded. The battle seemed distant to them now. She was finally going to have something that Cloudspinner wanted, she had won!
-Nightstar
"Kits away from the entrance" Her voice was soft but commanding at the same time.
-Rubysoul
(Oh no! We lost our deputy!)
Morningpaw ran from an angry tom, screeching and not knowing what to do.
Screeching slammed into Blizzardsights sensitive ears. He followed the source, then soon attacked the tom attacking Morningpaw.
Vividpaw jumped nexto Morningpaw smiled and asked "Need some help?"
~Vividpaw
Morningpaw turned to see Vividpaw and nodded."Thanks." She purred kindly, then turned to face the tom.
Blizzardsight heard shuffling of two apprentices."I bet you can handle it." He said, then leaped off.
Bumblestep blinked. "Cloudspinner," he whispered so Nightstar couldnt possibly hear him. "please forgive me. I have a plan.. just make sure that Wonderstar and Leafdew pick a good deputy to replace me while I am gone. Make sure that they know I WILL come back." he finished with a sigh. "Nightstar please let me help her to camp. Please."
~*Bumblestep*~
Tigerkit nodded, and he and his siblings stepped back a little. His eyes were still wide as he listened to the raging battle.
~*Tigerkit*~
Ashpaw screamed for help.
Flashpaw and Swiftpaw tried to get to their sister but the Ironclan cat didn't let them.
"Traitor." She hissed under her breath. Her back was screaming at her, and her senses were dulled by the pain.
-Cloudspinner
Her sighed. "Okay Bumblestep. I will be waiting."
-Nightstar
Blizzardsight ran to another apprentices defense. He could tell the attacker was distracted by two other apprentices, so he came form behind.
Morningpaw lashed at the toms nose with Vividpaw at her side.
Ashpaw whimpered with fear and pain. She slashed and her attack who hissed with pain, and a sharp pain exploded in the side of her head.
~ Ashpaw
Swiftpaw tried pushing his sister's attacker but the Ironclan warrior was twice as big as he was. So he bit the tail.
~ Swiftpaw
Flashpaw jumped at the Ironclan warrior, who's tail was being bitten off by an angery Swiftpaw. He nipped at the warriors paw.
~ Flashpaw
Blizzardsight landed square onto the tom Swiftpaw and Flashpaw were fighting, who crumpled to the ground. When the tom turned to see who it was, Blizzardsight lightly felt for the face, then slashed with gleaming claws.
(Kinda waitin for Vividpaw to fight with Morningpaw.)
Bumblestep's eyes clouded with sorrow. He had good reason but he did not wish to share it with any cat but Cloudspinner. He gently lifted her onto his back and picked his way back to camp.
~*Bumblestep*~
She groaned with pain, her entire back was screeching in pure agony. "Let me down!" She growled with pure fury that shocked even her.
-Cloudspinner
He blinked then set her down in a patch of rabbit's ear moss. He sighed.
"Im really sorry about this.. I dont know if you'll ever forgive me.." He looked at her, then ran off. He fought back tears to keep himself composed as he approached Nightstar.
~*Bumblestep*~
"I will never forgive you! I hate you!" She yowled after him with fury. She cursed him under her breath as well.
"What ever you said to her. She deserved it. She never deserved to have even loved you." She laughed a bit before turning to head home.
-Nightstar
Bumblestep nodded solomnly, then followed Nightstar.
~*Bumblestep*~
Tigerkit slipped out from the den, and ran into the battle. He dodged paws and legs and screeching enemies, and tried to remain calm as he searched for Wonderstar.
~*Tigerkit*~
(should he get captured and raised in IronClan?? haha its a plot idea possibly..)
"I think you will be happy with me in IronClan." She turned to Bumblestep with a smug expression.
-Nightstar
Bumblestep nodded. "I think I will too."
~*Bumblestep*~
(..)
(Opps sorry! Sure!)
"Too bad poor Cloudspinner won't make it till next sunrise." Her eyes flashed in victory and it was obvious that she was exited about the death of Cloudspinner.
-Nightstar
She saw the tom kit and she rushed over, she didn't think that ForestClan would be a very great place for a kit after this battle. She grabbed his scruff and ran out with him. Darkshiver following close behind.
-Splashrunner
"IronClan fall back! We have gotten what we came for!" He yowled, he looked at the tiny bundle his sister was now carrying, it was a good addition to what they had already taken.
-Darkshiver
Tigerkit blinked up at his captor, but made no attempt to escape. He stayed quiet and whimpered a tiny bit.
~*Tigerkit*~
He didnt reply, in fear he might let something slip out.
~*Bumblestep*~
"Don;t worry little one, I won't hurt you. Things will be better in IronClan than ForestClan after this battle..." She murmured through his scruff.
-Splashrunner
"Why did you take it?!" He looked at the tom kit in his sisters mouth with disgust. "We have Wonderstar! She will kit soon enough, we don't need more kits than that!" He growled impatiently.
-Darkshiver
"I am trying to save innocent lives is all..." She looked away.
-Splashrunner
"Serves her right. I just wish that I had the time to claw her to shreds..." She pouted. She looked at Bumblestep, her blue-silver eyes searching his face.
-Nightstar
Bumblestep kept walking. Somehow, he knew that Tigerkit, or Sleetkit was also in IronClan now. He didnt know how though.
~*Bumblestep*~
Tigerkit blinked, and suddenly realized that the she-cat was acting almost motherlike to him.
~*Tigerkit*~
"If your trying to find adopted kits to make up for your-" He stopped himself when he looked at Splashrunner who looked like a mix of wanting to shred something and breaking down in tears right in front of him. "I'm sorry."
-Darkshiver
"Don't be." She hissed and closed her eyes as she continued padding on.
-Splashrunner
(I just had a great idea, should Cloudspinner have been expecting Bumblesteps kits?)
(YES!!!)
Tigerkit blinked at Darkshiver. He felt his fur prickle in uncomfortableness.
~*Tigerkit*~
She came into IronClan camp and rushed over to Quiverbreeze and the newly arrived Wonderstar.
-Splashrunner
"Too bad her kits had to die too, they may have made fine warriors." She pondered.
-Nightstar
Bumblestep blinked. "What kits..?"
~*Bumblestep*~
Tigerkit blinked, and his eyes brightened. "Wonderstar!"
~*Tigerkit*~
She looked at him suprised. "Well yours of coarse! I thought that you knew that!" She blinked.
-Nightstar
"Tigerkit!" She grabbed the tom and curled around him nearly hissing at Splashrunner.
-Wonderstar
Bumblestep blinked. "No, I didnt. Shame."
~*Bumblestep*~
Tigerkit smiled. "I thought I would never see you!"
~*Tigerkit*~
"Well I'm sorry about killing them, but better them and Cloudspinner be dead then them all alive if you ask me..." She flicked her tail. Happy to be rid of the she-cat and her kits.
-Nightstar
"I'm glad your safe." She purred. At least some of her clan would survive.
-Wonderstar
Tigerkit nodded. "I miss my family... but I guess I have to move on."
~*Tigerkit*~
(haha he should turn evil and take over IronClan or something :P)
(Ummm Idk yet...)
"Your amazing calm for a tom who was just told that his entire family was killed." She giggled. He would make a great IronClan cat!
-Nightstar
(Sooo, they're killing Wonderstar, her kits, Cloudspinner, maybe HER kits, are any powerful people surviving?)
Ashpaw felt the wait lift off her and she scrambled up, soon to have Swiftpaw and Flashpaw fall on her to see if she was ok.
(NO THEY AREN'T JUST WIT FOR THE STORY TO FINISH.)
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